IELTS Ryan's video: You construct a band 9 essay by the end of this video

Join my FREE email course and receive my IELTS lessons in your email: http://eepurl.com/D9PX9 I have IELTS Speaking courses on Udemy! Learn more about them here: https://www.udemy.com/course/improve-your-ielts-speaking-in-60-minutes I'm also still running my online writing course! For more information: http://ieltsielts.com/product/5-corrections-with-ryan-save-25-usd/ Pick up the 2021 version of my ebooks here: http://ieltsielts.com/study-with-ryan/ Blog: ieltsielts.com Email: ryan@ieltsielts.com Twitter: @ieltsnetwork The essay as it appears in the video: Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Designing the layout of a new town is an extremely intricate process. The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town’s identity forever. In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles. I thus agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned, and I will share examples to prove this. Firstly, public parks and shopping centres help new towns foster a sense of community. For example, my small Canadian town has a very nice park near its centre. At weekends, the open context of the park environment makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships. This sort of organic community building is seen in my hometown’s shopping mall, too. Shopping malls encourage interaction, and thus they are great forums within which people can mingle and have experiences that could evolve into friendships. Thus, the helpful role public parks and shopping malls play in the establishing of a new town is clear. Secondly, sports facilities catalyse positive lifestyle choices among townsfolk. For instance, the central location of my small town’s football pitch is a regular reminder to people passing by that exercise is important. Children in the town are visually aware that sport is accessible to them, and thus they engage in physical activity regularly. This is a clear advantage to town designs that include sports facilities. As the above shows, public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities are helpful in many ways to the establishment of a town. Their inclusion in the planning of new towns is thus highly recommended.